AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
person zahneel
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! You've got to update! Poor Ryan, I hope he gets better. I help you feed your plot bunnies!*waves super growth food in the air* Please update soon!
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please don't tell me this story is over.
I want to find out what happens next. Please update soon because I am just dying in anticipation.
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the end was just like an episode start! it was brilliant!
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hugs all round!

i love that H and eric want ryan, and he may be a survivor, but will he be in one piece when they get to him?
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“You’re going to rot in hell for this,” Ryan finally hissed, even as the man ran his hands over Ryan’s exposed flesh. “My friends are cops. They’ll find me.”

“But then it’ll be too late, won’t it?” The psycho grinned

you know the evil fella has a point.

cool, the recaptcha words include the word wolfe hehe

i want to hug ryan, i feel like Alexx oh and in this fic, i also feel like H and Eric...
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, these fellas are evil! i want the team to find him and save him!
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
“I’m sorry, Horatio. I can’t do this any more. I’m sorry for being weak.” Ryan whispered

that broke my heart! i really feel for him, my poor ryan!
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
they might save him yet!

i just want to hug ryan and save him from his fate, and i want eric and H to save him!
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ryan wont be there will he? they were too late, so close and yet so far!
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it just keeps twisting and turning, ryan isnt going to be ryan anymore is he?

please save him!