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for A Man Out Of Time

by jennigirl

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schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is so beautiful, and hot, and kind of sad (in a really good way). I really enjoyed reading. Thank you so much for sharing your work.

Pip :)
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great entry here. Very sweet especially towards the end. I like the way the mystery lover (since we don't know his real name)lays Jack and then lays out his clothes; I just like the use of the two meanings of the word there, one represents wild abandon, the other, order...

Well done! :-)