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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice job actually keeping Dean in character and good use of humor. Probably would be better with a more intelligible explanation as to why they need to do this (or more of a hint that Sam's just making it up) and a tad more detail on Dean's internal monologue at the end.
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was hot, i really like the point of view you used writting it, it was amusing seeing deans changing opinion. i really hope you write another chapter to go with it
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was good. I liked the humor.