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Your spelling and grammar is shit.

So, the city girl went wild, no plot, just smut, I like it
*going back to work*

I think I'm the most dedicated reader...
*opens the bottle of wine while reading*

Can I print this? That was perfect , like it was written for me. One should put that on the nightdraver on one's spouse side :-)
Love your writing. Can't wait for more.
tchus
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It's me again, I think I should get an account or something on this forum, anyway I think that kind of story was something that suits Clois relationship perfectly, because Lois was in charge and Clark is still a little bit backed off. That was like a good sunday morning sex between married couple. A little bit spicy, but still very safe and caring. That's why I like Clois, Clana and Chlark are a little bit immature for me. It's amazing how you can change your style within such limited amount o words.
So... have you ever tried to write a Kalois fic? A kind of basic instinct story? For me the beauty of this relationship is that Lois is the only one who can comfort Kal, no matter how angry and horny he is, he won't really hurt her. Bt he can take lots of advantage on her, like in a really bad and kinky love movie. That's how I see Kalois, but you are the writer so maybe you have a different point of view. I.m gonna
read that, definitely.
tchus
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It's amazing how you can change your style within such limited amount o words....
ok, that didn't sound right, ups sorry. I means your stories are rather short , except Chlark one. I wanted to say that you've got the gift of changing your style while writing very short stories. God I talk to much and can't keepmy mouth shut when necessary. That's why I love Lois.
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So you can write a harlequin :-), that was good.
Can't wait for the next one, make it rough this time :-)
tchus
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