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for Just Use Your Imagination

by JetpackAngel

schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i actually surprised myself reading this one because im more of a adam/danny fan myself, but this story was really well written. :) keep up the good work!
schedule August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
^^ I actually prefer Mac/Adam...you pretty much made my brain melt. *is now a happy puddle of goo right along side Adam*
person kitty
schedule July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
personally (if you're interested) I'd like to read Don's encounter with Mac and Danny... that's a group ya don't normally see. good story!
person ECGBUnni
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i have to say, I love your work. Your dedication to accuracy and character development are admirable at the very least,something to try to emulate. Brava.
person sexysarah
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Wipes at drool* Wow... Lovin' it! That was beyond words! Definitely looking forward to reading more form you! I love how Danny actually admitted that Mac was more in tune with what was going on... It gives reassurance (to Mac) that if something was wrong, Danny would communicate it to him... I wonder if anything will follow? Chocolate chip cookies for you! (They're gluten-free!) -Sarah
person slash_srs
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Some asked about a good CSI NY fic, and another LJ member suggested your fics. I read this one first, to see if I liked your style. Wow! It was great. This was my first bottom!Mac, and I loved it. I especially love the was Mac takes over and helps Adam through it. Goes to show that you can't keep a good top down..
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, good story I really like the idea. On the other hand you might want to consider revising the way you write Danny's accent maybe I'm just not hearing it write in my head but it doesn't sound Brooklyn to me (I'm from NY and my family's from the city so I do have some background here). Keep up the good work.
person lis
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it

i hope you keep writing new york state of mind!
person chinksticks
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories, even though I'm usually uncomfortable with threesomes. I love your Danny/Mac interactions. Brilliant! :)
person munchkin50
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmm. HOT! I just love these guys together.

I never was much of a Mac/Danny fan until I started reading your stories. Now, New York State of Mind is probably one of my all time favorites. I'm REALLY glad you took the time to do this spin off.

I hope your muse kick starts on NYSOM soon. I can't seem to get enough of it. I keep going back and rereading, hoping more chapters will magically appear! (I have to tell you the whole "beer can" thing makes me snicker EVERY time I read it. he he)