rate_review Reviews

i normally dont like OC female characters but in this case, i actually like the succubus! she forces two hot men to have sex and is going to awaken Sam's powers, how could you not like her! i dont particularly care if it goes AU as long as Sam gets uber powerful! and theres lots of sex (...not hetero onegai^^)

I just have to say that the sex in this piece was steamy and I would still follow no matter what you did with it. I have been on the edge of my seat for an update so I hope that you follow your instincts and there's more feeding on Dean ahead.

If there's smut I don't think most would mind.

I really enjoyed the story!!! It's really good and "in character".
You know, I don't think you should go on as AU. I think you can continue without making it AU.
You just need to wait until the Season 4 starts (and see whats happend). According to the synopsis, we'll get Dean back, nobody knows how.
Ok, your demon didn't break his deal, but 1)Demons can lie:) 2)Dean will be freed from hell, so maybe she managed to come up with something?
Anyway, for now, you're somewhere near "Sin City", so you have plently of time to play:)
And your story is really very delicios:)
So keep on writing, let the demon have something on your mind (maybe it was her who helped to free Sam's powers so he was able to hold back Lilit?). By the time you get to the end ot the Season 3, you've already got some info from the 4, so I think you can do some great story without making the AU.
(Sorry for any mistakes, English is not my native).

I would be completely okay if you decided to go into an AU. I would absolutely keep reading!

I think AU would be the way to go. I have read a lot of fanfiction and AU fics can sometimes be better that things that go with canon.

I would read this story if it was au. I really enjoy this story and would hate to see it stop.

this is amazingly well written with solid plot... i love it!

Hey, just wanted to let you know I'm really enjoying this story =) I can't wait to find out what happens next! Quick question: how could Sam leave the motel room (after Dean went to get breakfast) when they salted the place? Okay no, I guess Dean could've moved the salt when he opened the door, expecting Sam to put it back. Hah, answered my own question. Well, I'm really interested in seeing how this is going to play out, so please keep writing! Thanks for the story ^_^

I hope you update sooner. I love your writing. You're really talented.