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for Rory's Rite Of Passage

by flatliner15

schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you should continue and write more and have them have breakfast together nude and have rorylike sit on Lorelai's lap and Lorelai feeds her and touches her all over while feeding her and have rory suck on lorelai's breast and include like breastmilk and Rory just can't get enough of it and always asks for it and starts to become a little girl all over again. Maybe include a friday night dinner where Lorelai has to feed Rory. It alsomakes Luke feelgood watching and maybe he gets to suck on her too or pleases Rory while she eats.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
liked it.
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Story. Gives me some ideas to include in the next addition to A Bender's Best friend. Thanks for reading my stroy. So whats this I hear about a Beta for me?
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting. How young did you portray Rory in this one? Was she still dating Dean? That, would make an interesting story. Although, I have never really been for M/F/F I like M/M/F better.
person cywen69
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read this somewhere else, did you post it on Literotica? I enjoyed it then and now.

Wendy