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for My Horrible Time

by Sailorselene

schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
an old favorite of mine. thankyou.
person Andy ( free beta )
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this story- yeah that sounds strange, i ment teh connection with JD and cox and i can't wait for the sequel you have planned!
person S. Cassidy
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Stupendous, the best I've read yet. Full of angst and emotion and Newbie love.
person Aresy
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great!! Yes, It would be cool if you continued. Good job on this fic. ^^
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! they were saved!
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Cox...bt at least J.D. will get better...even though when he wakes up and finds out what Cox did for him he will probably feel gulty. Update soon!
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up! I want to see how they get out, but of course not until they are abused!
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my poor JD. Why is Matt doing this? Please update soon!
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love following this!
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is interesting, yes but it doesn't really seem to be going anywhere. They're kidnapped, I get that; Matt's obsessed with JD, sure! But what else? You need more depth, more description. Why is Matt like that? How did he come to know JD, stalk him or whatever it might be. Show the inside of his mind. Let the reader in on part of the plan. But don't dismay, my friend, for I do enjoy your story. I just want to help you to make it better. And perhaps I have no idea what I'm talking about and you're doing it deliberately this way. I'm just a person at a computer looking for a bit of enjoyment. Keep up the good work and I look foreword to seeing more of you. :)