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for Dark Angel: What if?

by supman

person Anon
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should really update. I really love the scenarios that you come up with.
person Safir84
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I'm only gonna leave a review for "HELLO, GOODBYE", because that's the only one I liked, I'm an avid Max/Alec shipper, so, there ya go! The plot was pretty good, as well as the little interaction between Max/Alec. The the smut or in this case; porn was pretty damn hot, I'll give you that! Kudos!

More so, I guess I should mention a few of my thoughts on: "DESIGNATE THIS", it was a bit too N/C for me and well, twisted for my taste, specially towards the end, oh well!

person recicup
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You have a knack for this stuff. I even checked out the Chyoo story. *thud* Anyway, I don't have any particular request other than to please keep updating this whenever you can. K, I need to go get my oxygen tank and maybe even the crash cart....
person Frank
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it!

more ncon stuff please
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update!
person blikst
schedule July 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the last chapter even though Walter never has been a huge favourit of mine ;)

Also I have a suggestion for a story. In 'Love among the runes' Max gets captured by White and is handcuffed to the ceiling as White rips her shirt of to look at her runes. It could be fun if that turns into a sexual story.

Looking forward for your updates in any case.
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As you already know, I loved this chapter! It was exactly what I was hoping to read. Very well done, with a nice touch of humor at the end. I also really liked how you kept the tension up with her feelings for Alec and Logan and the other men in her life, without making the Kendra/Walter session too uncomfortable to read. I always felt that with Kendra being a rather openly sexual person, that it was only natural that at some point she and her Mr. Multiples would like to share the wealth with the repressed roomie haha--Not to mention that Kendra's rather open-ended disappearance from the show in season 2 was more than frustrating. But anyways another fantastic installment. I can't wait to read what's coming up next!
person SandZ
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good update with chapter 7.

I really like the idea about a multi-part story with max being brainwashed.
person Kamber
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it. update please!
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it. one thing that i want to see is a max/lydecker scene. we never really get to read one of those and i think it could be possible, especially at the end of the first season. can't wait to see what you have next