rate_review Reviews

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE

nice work, would love to seen some rory/luke

Wow, way to make Luke look like an asshole. You should be ashamed to have posted this story, it's not even in the spirit of the show at all, and Rory at that time was very sexually shy so why would she get hot to Luke raping her mother, much less accepting of it at all for the sake of Chilton? I have only three words for your so called 'sex scene'; chauvanistic pig crap.

Take it from someone who's been in the fandom since S1; this story is garbage. Don't continue it.

great start

MrSchimpf, thank you for your review. However, this story is labeled "ALTERNATE REALITY," which means you can expect people to have different personalities than they did in the show. Of course the Luke character in the show would never do something like that. Neither would Lorelai or Rory. If you only want to read stories where the characters only act the way they would in the show, then stay away from AR/AU stories. I am very sorry I offended you.

Oh, by-the-way, this is MY FUCKING STORY! I could have had Luke lock the door, tie up both Gilmores and rape them all night if I wanted to. I can make Kirk into a serial killer. That's the awesome thing about writing your own fan fiction stories: ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN! It does not have to be "in the spirit of the show" if I don't want it to.

On a lighter note, I did enjoy your Lorelai/Paris story.

Corsair420, don't worry, Rory will come into the equation. Check back in a couple weeks.