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Lorelai confronting her at the door naked just cracked me up. LMAO funny. Can't wait for Luke to join them.

Wendy

Love it (:

Nice set up for the next chapter can't wait for it

Good chapter

Great ending to the chapter

Wow, the last two chapters were so hot. I never was a big Rory fan until today. Who knew a virgin could be such a slut. I loved the idea of her practicing on a cucumber - LOL so Rory to want to learn how to do it properly. I could picture her on an internet 'how to' site also. Lorelai getting off to her own child was a bit sick, but hot. Now I'm waiting for the threesome to come. I can't wait for more.

Wendy

Wendy,

Thank you for your positive comments. I'll be continuing the story in a few weeks.

(Yes, a threesome is in the plan.)

-Kelron

great chapter, update soon

I am starting to really like this story. I do think it's very occ, but who cares. I get bored reading the same old thing all the time. As for Luke in this chapter, karma's a bitch!!! And Rory, that little hussy, who knew? I can't wait for all the sex to come. Maybe he should have a little rough sex with her, to try to discourage her, especially if he takes her cherry. Try to get her to hate sex. LOL - Only to find out she likes it rough. I just hope you don't leave us hanging too long for updates. I get antsy with stories I really like.

Great job so far.

Wendy

I liked Rory in this chapter. Can't wait to read more