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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Luke coming (dirty!) next scene!! And keep writing! My favorite AFF story!
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far, pretty hot in parts, but one request:could you please try and get either Lane or Paris in on the action somehow?(though preferably Lane as there's very few other fics out there that have her having any kind of sexual experience)
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter can't wait for more
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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I have been waiting for more of this fic for forever!!!!! Keep writing and posting!
I was definitely surprised with the choice of guy! Totally expecting Luke! I think that would be a good threesome to include at some point! Prefereably soon! or maybe do more than a threesome... hmm, well you are the writer, so I guess that leaves it up to you!
I was definitely surprised with the choice of guy! Totally expecting Luke! I think that would be a good threesome to include at some point! Prefereably soon! or maybe do more than a threesome... hmm, well you are the writer, so I guess that leaves it up to you!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kelron,
Did you forget about this or what. It's been almost a month and no updates. I'm dying here!!!!! I really hope you update soon. You were so good about it up 'till now and now that the best part is cumming you let us hanging for over four weeks. You are so mean!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Wendy
Did you forget about this or what. It's been almost a month and no updates. I'm dying here!!!!! I really hope you update soon. You were so good about it up 'till now and now that the best part is cumming you let us hanging for over four weeks. You are so mean!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Wendy
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
crono,
Adding Jess in would be interesting, but I hated his guts too much in the series. I was thinking about Dean in another story possibly.
-Kelron
Adding Jess in would be interesting, but I hated his guts too much in the series. I was thinking about Dean in another story possibly.
-Kelron
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao I love what lor said in the end cant wait for more!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As much as I'm not that big of a fan of girl on girl, much less mother/daughter, this was pretty hot. And I agree, you need it for the three of them to get together. All I have to say is poor Luke when he fially gets to join in. They may tear him apart. They both can be very demanding in bed, and I can picture them fight for his attenetion. I hope he can satisfy both of them.
Wendy
Wendy
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you should put some jess in like he's visiting or something
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job