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Love it! I hope you finish it!

maybe they should go to a Friday night dinner at The Gilmore's anyway and like touch Rory at the same time under the table or expose her in the diner on a table or the counter or take her into the pool house and or Lorelai's old bedroom and take advantage of her and do things that Lorelai has in her dirty mind and keep Rory from going to school to please her all day a few times a year or have rory fake sick so they can please her a lot.Things happen at the Independence Inn like Lorelai touches Rory all over in a room or the kitchen when nobody is there like in the middle of the night or Sookie doesn't go to work and Lorelai can't help stop touching Rory. Lorelai maybe starts to rebreastfeed Rory and Luke rubs her breasts a lot to make her start reproducing milk? They get Rory to start producing milk?

liked it.

Good stuff. Rory's hot hot hot here.

Thanks wendy! I have no idea where all the hits came from.

I stop by every once in a while, but don't do much writing anymore. You can consider this one complete. I might do another someday, but definitely not of this length. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Kelron,

Where are you?!!!??? It's been 16 months and no word from you? God, you'd think after getting over 50,000 hits on this, that you would update it. Are you dead? Did you drop off the face of the Earth? Please come back and update this soon!!!!

Wendy

Good stuff - wasn't sure about the first chapter which had too much dialogue, but after that it hots up. The chapters can be a little short, but that seems to be pretty common, so it may just be my personal taste for longer chapters in fic. Still a pretty good tale and the Rory/Lorelai sex is nicely done.

update soon i love this fic!

Thanks for your review BIG E. I would totally agree that the last few chapters have focused on the sex and not the characters. That should change after the next chapter.

Hi there! Thank you for taking the time and writing this story. It started out well written with focus on story and character development and - unfortunately - has turned into a PWP story. If that's what you're aiming for, mission accomplished. It's a sex(y) story using familiar character names. If you'd like to keep it more on the storytelling side of the spectrum, take your time and focus more on the characters and their emotions.