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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
THat was real sweet, you know, I aint thought much abut smells, but sometimes when grandmother baked buns ya could smell it all over the house, an' I sure love the smell of bread, but the most 'home' smell I think is disel, and yeah, I know I'm nuts.....
I*m gonna have a chat with that fella though, Steelers are better than the Cowboys, they's got the bus, an' theys got that fella Joe whatever tackled a squad car, now that's football.........
Great chapter, all them sweet home stories were really great. I loved it.
Take care now *hugs* John
THat was real sweet, you know, I aint thought much abut smells, but sometimes when grandmother baked buns ya could smell it all over the house, an' I sure love the smell of bread, but the most 'home' smell I think is disel, and yeah, I know I'm nuts.....
I*m gonna have a chat with that fella though, Steelers are better than the Cowboys, they's got the bus, an' theys got that fella Joe whatever tackled a squad car, now that's football.........
Great chapter, all them sweet home stories were really great. I loved it.
Take care now *hugs* John
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Sorry Buck, but yer wrong, Dukes would be able to find trouble in a hardware store to, jut ya wait and see.....
Great hapter, the mushrooms in that stuff seemed familiar.... ;) I like the lady to, but Buck should hear how we do it here, either use a blunt corkscrew or a blunt cheese cutter. shoot, in comparision, them knives wouldnt hurt at all.. ;)
Real great chapter, funny.. *hugs* john
Sorry Buck, but yer wrong, Dukes would be able to find trouble in a hardware store to, jut ya wait and see.....
Great hapter, the mushrooms in that stuff seemed familiar.... ;) I like the lady to, but Buck should hear how we do it here, either use a blunt corkscrew or a blunt cheese cutter. shoot, in comparision, them knives wouldnt hurt at all.. ;)
Real great chapter, funny.. *hugs* john
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is a pretty cool way to let Buck know they beleive in him. That was really coo. That Dodd fella was a mea SOB, Want me to give him a whack with the crankshaft.. Im sure glad not all of them are ike him, but it's gotta be hard for lawyer at times. I know one ddn't wanna do it, but dint have much choice. Someones gotta do it......
It was a great chapter, I loved it, a whole lotta good stuff, misunderstanding an' all
Take care now, *hugs*
It was a great chapter, I loved it, a whole lotta good stuff, misunderstanding an' all
Take care now, *hugs*
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know that was great, and you know what my favorite is, 'saloon' I kept saying that for several minutes as I was reading, and now to, I love that one.
Great the way JD and Buck settled things, I think JD grew up some there.
Awsome chapter, take care now, *hus* John
Great the way JD and Buck settled things, I think JD grew up some there.
Awsome chapter, take care now, *hus* John
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey
That was a great chapter, I like the way Vin went thrugh all o them to figure their reactions, and what Nathan told Vin. It's something no one thinkgs about, but everyone knows at least one rape victim, most peope just dont know that they do, so it makes a lot of sense for him to know something like that. It seemed like it helped to. I like the way Vin took JD to talk to him as well, JD is inexperienced and it's a good excuse, but only as long as your willig to learn.
Great chapter, take care now, John R
That was a great chapter, I like the way Vin went thrugh all o them to figure their reactions, and what Nathan told Vin. It's something no one thinkgs about, but everyone knows at least one rape victim, most peope just dont know that they do, so it makes a lot of sense for him to know something like that. It seemed like it helped to. I like the way Vin took JD to talk to him as well, JD is inexperienced and it's a good excuse, but only as long as your willig to learn.
Great chapter, take care now, John R
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey
That was a great chapter, I like the way Vin went thrugh all o them to figure their reactions, and what Nathan told Vin. It's something no one thinkgs about, but everyone knows at least one rape victim, most peope just dont know that they do, so it makes a lot of sense for him to know something like that. It seemed like it helped to. I like the way Vin took JD to talk to him as well, JD is inexperienced and it's a good excuse, but only as long as your willig to learn.
Great chapter, take care now, John R
That was a great chapter, I like the way Vin went thrugh all o them to figure their reactions, and what Nathan told Vin. It's something no one thinkgs about, but everyone knows at least one rape victim, most peope just dont know that they do, so it makes a lot of sense for him to know something like that. It seemed like it helped to. I like the way Vin took JD to talk to him as well, JD is inexperienced and it's a good excuse, but only as long as your willig to learn.
Great chapter, take care now, John R
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was a real good one, the way they let the others in to see the discomfort, and the whole deal, becaseu it really is true, that's where the trust and healing has got to start. Man, I would love to try Vin's coffee some day, that'd be a treat... ;)
I really liked the way Buck had made sure he had his clothes next to Vin, it was real neat and a real good touch. Its the kinda thing most people would do, regardless of age. Added a lot to the chapter to, which was really good and very loaded.
Take care now, *hugs* John R
I really liked the way Buck had made sure he had his clothes next to Vin, it was real neat and a real good touch. Its the kinda thing most people would do, regardless of age. Added a lot to the chapter to, which was really good and very loaded.
Take care now, *hugs* John R
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Happy now? Am reviewing, shees, yer impatient Uncle Mouse, it's easier to finish reading fully before you do this ya know, ;) IT was a great chapter with Vin taking of to the land of I don't know whats there reallly, but the indian traition really served well. Vin was realy sweet to when he asked that lady where the old lady was, he knows how to warm their hearts to him that boy, gonna be gret when he gets back to his family, poor buck is relaly fretting. Htat is another good thing, you got them down pat when Chris goes to fix steaks..... Take care now, *hugs* John
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, thats real loaded at the end, but they got the bastard and I'm sure glad for that, hope he gets off to a bad start in jail, he deserves it..... It was a great chapter, and I sure hope Vin gets back okay,, but I think the thers will see to it he does.
Take care now, great chapter, *hugs* JOhn
Take care now, great chapter, *hugs* JOhn
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So now boht of them are heading for the same wharehouse, I ain't sure what's gonna happen if they all meet up there, but it might be interesting. I understand the mother, but it's a shame that she seems to be blaming Buck to, understadable though, but not good. Vin sure knowns what he's doing. I loved the way he counted down to when Nathan wouldbe busting in, and the way they could guess where had had tossed the caps, that was really well done,
Take care now, *hugs* John
Take care now, *hugs* John