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by vinsmouse

person John
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for letting me know about the update. It was one o the best chapters yet, probably because it was sweeter and liighter. It kinda made a real great ending, and there was a lot of humour in it that was real great. You did an awsome job my friend, *hugs* John
person John
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

Aww that was good the way Ez was with them folks. Sometimes, too little too late is so little it never really makes a difference. And Ez is right, they werent investigating either, they were jumping too conclusions, why risk it a second time, there are always gonna be rumors about the first one.

Poor Vin, I can understand why he got so upset, but also, when something are wrong, friends are always gonna be talking aout you. It really is something they do becuase they care, and you'd do it to Vin, just too mad to figure it out.

I hope he and Buck are able to settle it, take care now, John
person John
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it takes time, but it'll be okay Vin, yer the kinda man will be okay. See Uncle Mouse, I remebred to be reading here... ;) It was a real good chapter to, very neat thingy to go doing to that dude. Real neat, but yeah, he should have to pay more, but who knows, he might.

Hmm, I gotta go now, I*ll have to save the ohter one.

Take care, *hugs* John
person John
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
With the dancing there, I'm thinking the sheriff from Happy Texas... ;)

Great chapter, Good for Vin that he is getting out of there. It was real funny the way Buck bribed him, that sure worked. I loved the way that tehy went to Ezra to, the whole ass u me thing again, or so it seemed. BUt it was a fun talk, and Chris there with the Japanase food, they realy are a family them guys, and a dang tight one. Especially since it's cause they chose to be.

I loved the story Buck told Vin to, just once question, did he use his own toothbrush, or a spare one?

Great chapter, take care now, *hugs* John
person John
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nothing wrong witht he hat JD, but watch out, someone might shoot it, an' then Chrs is gonna shoot it, and you too....

Great chatper, deep stuff, and good thinking on their part, about what he was doing outta jail. Funny, them really really bad ones seems to have an easy time staying outof there. Good job on JD's part with diggin info, and I liked the way Chris went after Ezra and talke to him. To many see Ezra as non caring, an' he sure as heck ain't so that was real good.

Sure liked it, and thanks for the note pointing me there, *hugs* John
person John
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awsome, that was real good for Vin that Ezra could do that, really good. Ezra is just full of surprises aint he?

Now that gal, where have I met her before? ;) That was a real awsome way to work her in, you've done awsome meldir nin.

*hugs*
person John
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Surley eveyone must agree that was a great chapter, ;)

I loved it, they made some progress there I think, and it was good for Vin to know that the others was there as well. He needs all off them, and need all of their assureance to, for more than one reason. It's vin though, so I reckon he's gonna be okay. He's a strong boy, and real good looking to, can't do any permanent damage to someoene ike that, can we, ;)

*Hugs* Great chapter
person John
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I would wish you didnt use that particulary form of torture, or explaining about it, cause I had to jump a little this time to, but it's a real good chapter anyway, I love it. Kinda hard on ppoor Vin, but still fun thins,, like when he tried to tell him that his timing was impeccable ad Ezra had to help him with the word. THat was real fun.

Thanks for gettin me the notice you had posted. Take care now, *hugs* John
person John
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, very intense, the one kind of torture I can't stand to even read, so I kinda skimmed a part, otherwise, can I beat that guy to somethin goey with a crankshaft? please.........?

Take care now, *hugs* John
person john
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHeeee, Skinny enough to hide behind a fencepost, now where have I heard that before? ;) YAy, that was funny. I lve that house warming the way they teased Buck, that was real cool.

That was pretty bad luck, never ignore bad sins Vin they tend to be bad cause they're bad. I hope that bouncer ca tel them smmthing, cause I thik Vin needs a hand.

I loved the seven things wrong with the plan, I Had a feeling that it would get down to his team mates.

Real great chapter, take care now, John