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for Red K Summer

by SpecialFX

person Jimbo_2400
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, keep it going!
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
person pipersmum
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the update and Kal is definitely having a battle with Clark lol! I thought that was what Monique had given her, Chloe is really getting under his skin. I know you have not long posted but I really hope you post chapter 8 soon I can't wait.
person lothous
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great cant wait for more
person pipersmum
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last two updates I think Kal will be just that little bit more human with Chloe he forgets himself I think that Clark is trying to make his presence know lol. I loved Chloe or should I say Cindy playing him at his own game and the smut in the back of the cab was...... H.O.T Really enjoying this story and looking forward to see what happens later on in the evening.
person Jimbo_2400
schedule July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome so far, please keep going with the story
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Though it's not quite my kind of story, I think the characters are extremely well-written.
Despite her temper, Chloe is the type of girl who one can easily dominate. And Clark behavs exactly like a horny teenager, who suddenly discovers he's good at something. This is a well description of immature sexuall relationship, very god itself. For me, much better than the Clois Red K Summer story, which was very hot itself, but for me the characters were a little bit out of character (they were simply too young to act like you described). By the way,I can't resist to comment that if there was Lois on Chloe's place, she would slap his cocky smile out of his boyish face.
All in all, the story is great, I'm a devoted fan of your work, so please write more. And soon.
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Three words come to my mine Steamy ,wet ,hot that was very enjoyable
person pipersmum
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just read all four chapters and I love it. Clark on red K is so hot and mean at the same time lol!! Chloe just can't help herself with him can she and now she has agreed to experience his world this can only get more interesting. I hope she can manage to make him jealous perhaps maybe if he is with another girl she can find a guy to use and abuse!! ;) Looking forward to chapter 5 :)
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was other hot chapter.