rate_review Reviews

Hey JayDee, figured I'd check out a story of yours and chose this because I like Firefly. *shakes head slowly, grimacing* You know, it really doesn't matter what disclaimers you make, if a cat is curious enough, it'll become road kill. That's me. Tire tracks across my blood-matted fur, viscera hanging out, stench of shit. Yeah, I don't think I need to go into my first impressions because I've mentioned to you that I'm not into shock. So, I let it digest for a few days and now, here are my second and third impressions.

Kaylee is strangely naive for a "worldly" traveller. (perhaps a better choice: versely?) She doesn't have a sixth sense. You'd think in the fiction world, she would have known something was hinkey when she stepped in the shop. It's just goes to show that crap shoots out at the most unexpected times, except ... the planet and the type of people who inhabit it should have been foreshadowing if she had half a brain. I'm not saddened by what was done to her, just not good at stomaching the detail. But I was quite thrilled that she rose up with determination, cut off her own hand, cauterized it and took thug #1 out. (or was it thug #2? - I don't really give them the dignity of remembering what order they are mentioned in the story) I thought for a minute that she had become a Reever. (I hope the word and spelling are correct, Its been awhile since I watched) I was kinda hoping she would eat the other one! Ah well, the heroine can't always win and gosh darn it, no one will be able to tell the tale, so she's not even a heroine.

So, I had a reaction, and then I had thoughts, but ... I still prefer not to revisit the torment. I was worried I would have a nightmare, or at the least, a "bad" dream. I didn't. I think I learned something, though. Take the author's warnings to heart. Just like Kaylee, I was naive and thought I could handle anything, even though there was clear foreshadowing. (blatant warnings) I'm just happy I'm still alive to tell my tale.

I am seriously disturbed by the mind that came up with this shit.

Kaylee getting snuffed? I'll be in my bunk.

I sure don't understand why ppl complain about this story.
It's very well writen and has a great amont of details.
Okay, it's brutal and everything ...... so what ????????
It's a fiction and JayDees disclaimer makes 100% sure what he things about that stuff in RL.
Just because someone can write something like that does't mean he has a problem, hell i read this stuff and enjoy it, thought i wouldn't let my kids read it.

To those who complain : You have been warned at the first few lines, if you don't like gory and brutal story, DON'T read them. ...... i am pretty sure it's pointless to write that here but oh well .......

Again JayDee a good story, not 100% my cup of tea but still a good story.

wow....brutal and well written.

I love the ending of this story. It really drives home the fact that a formerly living, breathing human being is not worth less than human feces. As I commented elsewhere, the disgrace of it all makes me wish she was still alive in the end to experience it! But I guess you can't have it both ways. Nobody can be alive to experience the defilement of their own corpse.

O.O

I... wow, I'm not even sure what to say. Poor Kaylee! lol, it was written nicely and all that, but it somehow just wasn't what I was expecting...... so wow.