rate_review Reviews

I hope you do a sequel to this story maybe Karen finding out what Lucas did to Brooke and losing all friends and his brother who has been friends for a long time with Brooke and maybe even getting the police involved!!!

you're fucked up. this is bad writing. you have no regard for the characters at all. even if i liked the idea of the story, your charatcers and plot are poorly done. you're not a writer. you're actually very very bad at it. did you actually reread this and think it was good? not even a little bit.

this is absolute garbage. EVERYTHING is wrong with this story. You clearly have no talent whatsoever, and you may even be brainless. You can't just have Lucas behave this way with no motive, and without character development.. and even Brooke's internal dialogue made me roll my eyes--it wasn't in character.. it was trash. This is the worst piece of junk I've ever laid eyes on. Don't wrote ever again. You must be a pretty big idiot to post this and actually think it si worth anyone's time.