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for Tryst

by WhisperElmwood

person JChat
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... just wow. Very hot, I think my brain just melted. Hesitation, teaching, and a whole lot of pleasure. I liked it muchdly!
person jeazard
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and oh. so. hot.
You got both of them perfectly right: their characters, the way they act and look - everything, just right. I could imagine them like this, reading each sentence, each word as you painted that picture in my head.

Thank you!
person Jessia
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell that was HOT! I can't believe no one has reviewed this. Shame on them! You are an awesome author. I bow down to your smutty prowess.