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by darkedward

person meakochan
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should write more on this. It's a cute fic, and I love it.
person Catt
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For a first time fanfiction writer it was a wonderful one-shot. I encurage you highly to write more, and will keep an eye out for it.
I think that if you are going to continue the story you are going to ither be omnipotent and give Casey's perspective, or have her tell Derek point-blank what she is feeling/thinking.