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for rehearsals

by charlie

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read het, but because it's you, I thought I'd check it out anyway. Plus you kinda asked me to, lol. Must say, you've got Tristian's voice down perfectly, I can really see him saying these things as I read. And you tapped into Rory's feelings quite well too, it all felt very realistic. Good job!