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That was really good! Your writing is excellent! Please continue!

Well That was an interesting story I supose. As I see you are giving this story to adoption. Depite your reasonings in doing so that was a poor move as an author. I supose I will take a crack at this story. I should have a desent chapter out in two weeks. Regarding the reviewer known as "Dae". You should wright some for yourselve before you go and critisize people for their works. As I said before, I will have this story rewritten in two weeks on my profile.

With much respect,



The Prince of Madness

I like the concept for your story, really. But (not trying to offend) your writing style is a bit questionable to me. Your sex scenes are the longest feature of the story, and while that's not necessarily a terrible thing, it does detract from any story. In fact, if I took all the chapters you have written (minus your Author's Note chapters, which I consider very unprofessional) that would probably make one GOOD chapter. You need to extend the story. It can't just be "Fuck. Ass fuck. Tranny+Guy fuck." There needs to be PLOT. Additionally, your requests for reviews are understandable. However, your RANSOMING (that's what it is) of your story for reviews is unacceptable. You want reviews, go ahead and say 'Reviews are appreciated'. Never EVER say 'Give me reviews, or I'll stop writing.' That's just terrible form.

its been over a month still waiting

please bring the next chapter out this story is soo good

can u plz update pritty plz with a cherry on top

when r u goin to update

Plz continue this story :):)

it was awsome,i mean damn!

Me Likie. Take your time and continue this story.