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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
as a PMG and adored William Bush fan and his blue eyes, I like your story and your character Penelope , but, IMHO, story needs some fixes, such as wrong pronunciation of names like Doughty:)) the plot is nice and very hopeful, however, development of the story is hasty so it's little bit inconvenient, after all, I really like your story, if i am not wrong i read this story on a different fan fiction site, am i wrong? thanks for your good story and good reading.