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for Ursa Major, Ursa Minor

by Quicksilvermad

schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was just going through the firefly stories archive, saw your story and had to review it again. Cause it's soooooo awesome!!!! please write more
person Wilder
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:glomp: I absolutely love this story! it is amazing and so well written! i am shocked i haven't noticed it before, but i haven't been reading much serenity recently so that must be it... i love your Jayne! he is perfect and exactly as i imagined, i also love the whole mental barriers thing, they needed to have something else in common so he could understand her, and it totally made the fic flow to a beautiful end! still with wash was alive though... interesting how you didn't make zoe pregnant like so many others do... love it love it love it!
person Gaige Mosher
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was, without a doubt, one of the sweetest stories I've ever read.

And, yes, I can totally see those two together, odd as it may seem to some others.
person Quondam
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one big damn story. Well written, good plot and a joy to follow. Thanks for writing it.
person the smese
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i forget if i've reviewed this story once already, but either way truly brilliant. Great story line, it really felt like firefly
person ianitor
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you ever so much for writing this story! It is one of the most wonderful pieces of fan fiction I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I think you had two tiny little spelling errors or mistakes in ALL, and that's quality if I ever saw it!
You've captured the characters in a way that makes me downright envious. Your writing is quick, never drawn out but keeping the readers on their toes.
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.
Once again; thank you. :)
//ia
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I liked it. Good job making Jayne more than the show and film had time to do. And it wasn't a sexfest, which too many people do. I look forward to your epilogue
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great work, keep it up! Totally feels like the show!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brilliant, absolutely brilliant. I need more!