rate_review Reviews

This was such a charming story. Been reading this all day and it's been such a joy to read! I loved how you balanced joy with trials. Thank you for sharing this story!

I very much enjoyed this story. It was well written and complete. There are some typos but, that is editing. I love Jayne the charector, I throughly enjoyed the intelligent Jayne, new twist,but very believable. It would be a great coupleof episodes.

this was incredible!

*sighs happily* This would be my third time readin' this through...and now that I got Firefly's soundtrack, listening to the soothing sounds while reading... My heart is in an ever happy place. Ya made me feel all shiny! lol

Holy mother of... *get's ahold of her brain-functions...basically throws the hampster back on the wheel* Darlin'... I spent from 2am til now, which is exactly 8:56am reading this absolutely amazing piece of work. This wasn't a story, oh no... This was ART. I cannot began to shower enough praise upon this... Let me put it this way, I have been battling some physical issues for the past week, last night being the tip of my absolute agony... And when I came home, semi-broken, I remembered reading the first chapter of this story not long ago. So I fell back in...and went through a delicious array of overwhelming emotions, that just continued to spill through me with every chapter I read. I giggled, I cringed, I laughed, I gasped, I angered, and I almost cried. THAT NEVER HAPPENS TO ME. Being a fellow writer, it takes a great deal of talent to drag me through a lifetime of emotions in just 34 chapters. I can't begin to explain the ache my poor heart felt when Big Bear and Little Bear finally married... I dunno what ya did to me, but I ain't a chick-flick kinda girl. And now (All yer fault :P) I am actually glowing.

Well Done!!! *gives a sheepish grin and scampers off to finally get some sleep*

AH!
LOVED IT!
BRILLIANT WORK!
MEGA MEGA KUDOS!
*is grinning face off*

Waaah! I like your writing and your loving description of all of the characters. You nail their way of talking perfectly. This had me truly laugh out loud:

'He ran his hand over his eyes in an attempt to wipe his mind of the immediate smutty thoughts that came at the sight of River in a sexy red dress. He got rid of most, but that left legs legs legs legs, River legs, sexy River legs…'

Awesome! So Jayne.

Squeeel! I laughed through this whole chapter! God, it feels like I'm back at Serenity. :) And maybe even better....

'He only had Cassie and Boo with him and this felt like a Vera-type situation. He was unsettled, to say the least.'

Bloody brilliant!

This was truly amazing, i could barely stop reading to go to sleep! =DDD it was very well written and very poignant. I love Rayne, and this is one of the best Rayne Fanfics i have ever read ;)