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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good progress. I really want to find out what happens with the birth control pills and when blair finally sleeps with Jim or jim and rafe. Also i am confused does blair have both female and male genitalia?
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June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more Blair! that was a wonderful chapter and we finally got to see Blair's intellect. I can't wait for the next instalment
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG!!! Haven't finished reading it yet but I love it enough to review. Your writing is wonderful. I love this AU and can't wait for more!!!
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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. The Story is really moving along. I am excited to see how this situation is resolved. I can't believe they took Blair and the kids like that.
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am really enjoying this story. i am interested in how you are going to bring out the more "human" qualities of Blair, Rafe, and Jim. Right now the more instinctual and animal behavior is interesting but I would really like some dialogue and interaction between them more intellectual maybe. Anyway I really like the story so keep up the good work and update more frequently please.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I mean really, really awesome. I don't read Sentinel fanfics often, cause a lot of them are crappy. but this, this one had my attention from paragraph one and has held it through chapter seven. I'm actually hoping that there are more chapters to come. I'd never seen this kind of take on the Sentinel concept. It's really. congrats on a really original idea and a wonderful storyline.
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter 7 and thought it was very good. I am looking forward to reading chapter 8. Thank you.
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have just read chapter 6 and thought it was very good. I am looking forward to more of this story. I hope that you will continue to write it. Thank you.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it :)
really good :)
ok
thats all :)
really good :)
ok
thats all :)
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have just read your story "Bought" and thought it was very good. Would you please tell me if you are going to finish this story.
Thank you and I look forward to your reply.
Thank you and I look forward to your reply.