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by neichan

person Rose
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story, love the world you created, and enjoyed it throughout. I see it is not finished here, and in case any other readers are frustrated, I found it completed!!! Here...at squidge. Hope the URL shows up.
http://www.squidge.org/peja/cgi-bin/viewstory.php?sid=28563
person neichan
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I quite forgot I had posted Bought here. The completed fic is at AO3 and WWOMB. Thanks for comments. Very kind!
nei
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I am so glad I found this story. It was awesome. But poor Blair. I hope the guardians find a way to keep him from going to the house. Great story.
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi, me again. i was just wondering, what if the babies stopped feeding once Blair was gone? in your story they seemed to have a very direct connection to Blair and what he is feeling. surely their mother being in distress having to breed again with a stranger would have some repercussions on the children. please update, i wanna find out what will happen!!
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, I love this story!! please update again soon, I want to find out what happens at the Guide House. I really wish Blair didn't have to go there. maybe they could find out that Jim got Blair pregnant and they would be able to go back to the compound or something. I'm glad that Blue got with Rathe, now they're not alone anymore, yay! again, please update soon, you have a great story here!
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read all 22 chpts of this piece today and I love it! Im disappointed that it hasn't been updated since June. Please write and post more soon!
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a fantastic story leaving me hanging for more. Any chance for further chapters? At this point I'm hoping that Blair will find he is already pregnant with Jim's baby(ies) when he gets to the Guide House. We'll see where your muse takes you.

person hardleyf
schedule June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this installment. It is really interesting. I just bet Rathe and Caleb will get together. I really an excited about how Kim and Blair are going to reconcile and I hope Blair doesn't get pregnant by anyone but Jim.
person hardleyf
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
coming along beautifully
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! It is fantastic how often you update, even waiting a few days is torture. This story has so much potential!!! Keep writing!!!