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by Johnnyjosh

schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Favorite parts had to be the icing to coat lips, and the Magic Fingers to soothe the afterpain away. You can just feel the love in every gentle, bracing, and lustful gesture. Can't wait for that bathtub scene.
person Birddi
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie,

This was a really good story. You did a great job and I can't wait to see more work from you. Thanks for letting me beta the third chapter, sorry school work came up but the last two went super well. I'm so proud of you. The characters are awesomely wrote, and the humor makes me giggle, and its a really great job! ^_^ ::huggles:: Catch you around.
person atanablackfox
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*taps foot impatiently*

OK, you've had the weekend to write the next chapter.

Where is it?

;)
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE DAMMIT!!!!

Hee, does that count? love you're story - there's so much good stuff on this site and so few reviewes!

Love the Trickster - him helping get Dean out of the deal. That is an awesome idea. Proibably better than what the Kripkeeper will come up with. I'm beging to think the fanfic is getting better that the plotline on the show. (The acting rocks, however, what J-Pad and Jensen do with the material they're handed is great.)

And you're another one of the reasons I think this!

Just to be sure you get the point:

MORE DAMMIT!!!
person viper
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter! I can't wait to read the next one and read the hot brotherly love ^_^. I just hope you're not going to kill Dean in the end!
person theblackrose (not signed in)
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this! Love it love it love it. Please update soon!
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“It felt…right.” In such a *wrong* way. Mmm. Mmm. :)

“Before you kissed me, I’d never even thought about something like that, now…it’s all I can think about.” Gosh, that was some kind of kiss! The heat, oh my. I need a Dean so I can be persuaded of things so instantaneously.

I love how their usual roles are reversed, and it's Sam who's lost to everything but the pleasure, the euphoria that's just on the brink, while Dean's the one thinking things through. You never know which way you're going to be swayed when what's so *wrong* is hot between your thighs. This chapter is delicious. Oh, especially when Dean's commando status is revealed. That's very like him; made me giggle a bit.

The amount of tender foreplay gives the chapter a different feel than other Wincest stories that have struck me. It's nice to have seen the pendulum swing both ways.

I'm longing for more... and I know where you chat. *g*
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fangirls, hee. I'll admit we're an obsessive bunch. Strange, what we worship, but oh well. I am not ashamed. I have the t-shirt to prove it. :P

Make Dean talk, Sammy! I want to hear it all pour out of them both.
person viper
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! That was so hot and at the same time extremely hilarious. Those fangirls were so funny, they smacked they boys on their asses with paddles! I wonder who this mystery guy is. Maybe it's the trickster that they didn't kill in the series. I'm looking forward to finding that out and to reading what you're going to write next.
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Their awkward, stunted tenderness is very telling. Makes me eager to wait for whatever pin it is that knocks one of them over into the other's arms. That stupid cop gets a front row seat ahead of me. *pout* :)