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by Patcat

schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Once again, amazing job Patcat! Love this!
I was about 3 chapters in when I realized it was yours. =) I should've known by the all-caps title. Rats! =)
~Snyder~
person mel
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent! You did a great job with Bobby's internal suffering and the ending was really well done.
person frog
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story....so Bobby is into this um ..m&ms ro s&ms ...will Alex figure it out and I would love to see her in all that black leaather and whip with Bobby....can't wait for more...thanks
person bluedecor
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've really hit on something here. I'm just bowled over by your interpretation of Bobby Goren. Please don't abandon this story! Your worshipper awaits the next chapter.
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I can't wait to read the rest of this! Amazing set-up and a very interesting premise, with all the humanity you always bring to your stories. I look forward to more.
person kacey
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story set-up. You have the dialog on target too. keep it up.