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for Becomes of the Lost

by Havoc

schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A quite common story idea, but I think you have captured the early attitudes of the other characters to Ryan very neatly. Please update soon!!!
person zahneel
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
1) Your co-workers are idiots or don't own a tv or computer to NOT understand the snickerings when you find a characters name happens to actually be owned by a person.
2) Update! Update! Update!
3) I love your story and I have no problems with tending a pot bunny patch for you.:D
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH! i love the story! >< i cant wait for the next chap!*hugs u* keep at it
person Getty
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, you have nailed all the temperments of the characters just perfectly!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! More! Please?
person LynZ
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beginning seems a bit atypical of Ryan-centric fics, but I'm still interested in seeing where you're going with this.
Hope you post more soon...
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rate 5 ***** ( i mean 5 x 5)
The topic may be rather common, everybody writes about it, but unlike those, I can't wait to see how the rest goes on. Unlike most of them, you can write well.
XD keep em comming!