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for Love of the Dawn

by Hnoss

person viper
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, I wouldn't want to be her when the Morningstar catches up with her! Great scene in the car, very hot! I wonder if Dean will fall in love with Satan or if their 'relationship' is just going to be temporary until Satan got what he came for. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter and can't wait to read what happens next!
person tib
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the most unique view of Satan I've ever seen. Add Dean's confusion and frustration with himself to this whimsical Satan makes this very light hearted and funny. Makes me wonder what you have in mind next? Is there another shoe to drop?

person viper
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was sexy, very sexy! poor Dea, completely overwhelmed, it was pretty funny, the way he couldn't concentrate on the road. I wonder how you're going to have Dean explain Satan's presence when they find Sammy and if Bobby will have any suspicions. are you going to bring Missouri into the story or not? anyway keep up the good work
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE SOON
person viper
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
beautiful, simply beautiful! this seems like the beginning of a brilliant story. I especially loved your description of Lucifer and calling him the Morningstar is original. I hope you update soon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea and it's definitely caught my interest. Can't wait for more!