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for Lizards And Teddy Bears

by PEJA

person deaths mistress
schedule June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute! Weird, but cute...I like it! Please update soon!
person bowsie22
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOHH, I like this idea a lot. And I feel kinda bad for Tony. I hope you update soon :D
person Uialnen
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update this story (Lizards and Teddy Bears)! *begs*
person galaxysunshine
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Request -- Please continue this story! I find it entertaining.
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Freaky but I love it! Please update soon.
person catz
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is a little more far out than I ususally enjoy, but I have always liked Gibbs/Dinozzo stories.

The alien angle is certainly interesting. I both love and hate that Gibbs did this. Let's face it he "Raped" Tony. Or at least had the Director rape him for his personal gain. It is bad enough that he pursued an intimate relationship with Tony without letting him know that he is not human, but having Jenny rape him to implant him with his offspring is pretty horrible. I always want a happy ending, but I sure hope you don't have Tony forgive Jethro too quickly. I know a child is involved and even if their love is a bit warped they seem to love each other deeply, but there are consequences. Not only did Jethro risk Tony's life without his consent he has obviously caused him great emotional distress to go with the physical. All this for his own selfish reasons. Tony obviously already has some emotional issues -- I don't believe he would bounce back from this very quickly.

I hope you write more soon. I am waiting see how this pans out.

Thank You and Good Luck!!!
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah so cute, but there needs to be more.
person Roxas
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Personally I would enjoy seeing where you take it but if thats not going to happen a fan can dream can't they. I like the idea of Gibbs being form a different species rather then a human/ plant its unique and I haven't seen anything like it but itf that won't happen at least I got the chance to read some of what is or was going on through your mind.
person barbara
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update pretty please i love this story
person ShadowCat17
schedule August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you continue this!!! I read this and then I read chapter 5 on WWOMB and I so want more!!! Because I have to know how it ends and if Tony changes his mind!!!!!!