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for Breaking tension with a knife

by jbeau

person 1MissPotter
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just by first chapter I know that you do not know the characters personality anywhere near enough to write the essence of who they are. How they would speak is one example: Booth would NEVER call Bones Babee.
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hott!!!
More please!
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?