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by spankingfemfatale

schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very nice. :) I enjoyed this very much (Charlie and Eko are my favorites).

You have the characters' "voices" down very well, and I love the way you portrayed Charlie's inner struggle and guilt. Eko was perfect as well in his firmness and determination. Poor Charlie. :(

I truly hope you plan to write more about these two! I'd love to see some slash/smex involved, but just plain discipline is just as good. ;)