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This is an amazing story. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

HOLY SHIT!!
Loved every single second of it, hope there is a bit more to come, prehapse a relationship to come? A slower more adventurus scene? Anything to wet my apetite lol!
Evtreamly well written, characters perfect and extreamly origional, i'm writing a fic along simular lines myself, and this has spured me on to continue and get some more poster, thank you and well done.
Hope to see more soon.
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I normally read this story on fanfiction.com, but I've enjoyed it so much that I didn't want to miss anything by reading the abridged version. great stuff. and seriously, did Jack ever doubt from the beginning that he loved Daniel. It was quite obvious in the way he looked after him. keep up the good work, I look forward to more.

^_^ Finally! I do hope that they will be able to be together, after this. They're so good together, they have to be!

Wow. Please, please, update soon! And, if you do e-mail your readers about updates, would you be able to e-mail me? I would love to be kept posted on this. It's so very good and I can't wait for more!

This is just great! The angst level was getting a little high there for a moment but the last part of chap 9 had me almost laughing myself stupid!! XD
So well written and the pace is just about perfect. Please continue!