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I love this and your CSI:NY story, but I can't help but want to know who the guys in Vegas you mentioned in this chapter were. I'm guessing one of them is probably Gil since you have Supervisor/Subordinate thing going on. I don't know if you're continuing with these stories, but if you are, would it be possible for you to email me when you update?

-Lenora

I'm enjoying reading the two stories. . . I can't wait to read chapter 6 of New York State of Mind. keep up the good work.

Followed this from your story New York State of Mind which I was enjoying but I am dissapointed to see that you seem to be heading for the predictable tired and boring Dom Mac Sub Danny route. I am so fed up with poor submissive Danny and I had hoped that this story was heading for something more. Why does everyone see his character as week, suicidal or an ex rape victim. Its insulting to the character and this is coming from a Mac Fan.

I just found this the other day and I love it.

i've already told you once but it needs saying again. i love this story. in fact, i'm fairly certain that i love you as well. (but not in some creepy way, i promise)

i also love the fact that you've made billy joel songs a theme throughout the story. thats fan-fucking-tastic!

you are made of awesome and i'll fight anyone who says otherwise. seriously, i can get pretty hardcore with the keyboard. ;)

LOOOVE IT!!!!
keep up the good work.
i really enjoyed the characterization. sometimes when they do the D/s thing they mess it up, but you did wonderful.

can't wait for more :)

Great story!

I love the way you're writing this I can't wait for more. The reason that I've been rushing my story is simply because it is just from Ryan's POV mainly.

Hope you get more out soon!