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for The Long Road Back to Vegas

by NoHayRemedio

person Amanda
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad you finished this story. You probably should have labeled as AU, but the sex is outstanding.
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.
person Giwu
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. I never read WIPs because I have no patience. Let me offer to beta, to donate a pint of blood...anything so that I don't have to wait a whole MONTH before the next part. Great jon with everything...the storyline is amazing, the smut is greatand the introduction of Bruno. I really like playful Gil and Sara.

More please. Soon.
person splishsplash
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was hot. I MEAN THAT WAS HOT. I CAME JUST READING IT
person SaraLou
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot! can't wait for your next chapter!
person HHS
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A month?That's torture.But I loved reading this.
person Jeffery
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you and your man should keep up the great work in the bedroom, because it shows in your stories...my hat's off to him and you. You have great way with words and are very descriptive. Looking forward to Part 2