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by chibikitten

person Ex-cel-lance
schedule July 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I would like it so much better ( actually love it) if typos, improper Grammar, spelling mistakes and plain incorrect words didn't distract from the writing so much.
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. :) is there more? ;)
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say thank you for writing more. I read this story when you first sent it out and loved it then . I hope you do more for the boys I will be on the look out for it . It was so hot and steamy my glasses fogged up LOL. man you made my heart rate jump all over the story. again Thank you.
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok this is really good and well writen. Great Job! :~)
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-'"Ten thousands the limit"'-
*Dying* OMG! LOL. This is so much fun to read. I can't wait to see more! :-)
schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay...second chapter. *sigh* They were all talking and hugging, and I was all 'yay!' and then Clark found the room *whimper*. lol. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope they make up all nice and with plenty of 'physical expression'. *giggle* Well done. :-)
person HorseEMY
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Coming along nicely, can't wait for the next chapter! keep it coming!
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting! I'm enjoying the depth of the characters. I really like the way you're building the story, as well. :-) Thanks for sharing this. I can't wait to read more.
person Hnoss
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. I really love the ending where all the characters are talking. That was just funny. Please Update when you get the chance. I'm looking foward to reading more of this wonderful story.