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i loved it perfect combination of funny cute and extremly hot very good job you always have a way with chip/vida it's a shame you write about them anymore i know you probably don't have time for me to bother you but it's just that i'd love to read if you wrote anything about them on here or FF and i really think you should since not many people write about them or well like them and you make really good stories so try to give it a shot please?

That is perfect! Exactly how I would imagine them on the floor of the club. How appropriate that Chip is not wierded out by Vida's need to bite, but turned on by it. You are good.

Again very hot. Cute, some grammer and spelling errors, but no biggee and with more practice you can only get better. (hint, hint)

Well done! Funny and sweet and hot all wrap into one fic. Good work, DJ. Cannot wait until your next fic.