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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I look forward to more of these!
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There are some grammatical errors and places where you dropped words in a sentence, but damn...who cares! This story is so totally hot! Write some more, pleaase! LOL
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story. i cant wait to read more from it. its so amazingly written. keep up the great work
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was some hot stuff, DJ. Good work. Only problem, you need to cut down some of the sentences. They tend to run on a little too long. But beside that, excellent story. My favorite has to be Maddie's line of More sex. It cracks me up. Keep up the good work.