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for WARM THOUGHTS

by dmcintoshtx

person Lursa
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There is such a sad sweetness to this story. Again, very well done. Your use of Alex's interior monologue to show his true feelings/longing for Walter was very good. The segue into the dream/fantasy sequence was very smooth. I am truly enjoying your work.