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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story hope you update soon
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May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story...I can't wait for more chapters to be posted
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH DEAR FUCKING SHIT! That was amazing, and the fact it's based from one of my all time faovrite epsidoes, 'I Only Have Eyes For You'! '...she couldn’t help screaming loud enough for the neighbors to hear...' Good one! Hope there's more to this!
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a good story. I hope it'll be continued.
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very promising!!
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey hurry and update this story all ready and you should include a chapter were carmen has a threesome with max and jason
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn dude u should really finish this story!!!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Hope to see a second chapter soon, maybe a little Carmen/Angie action.
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good i like it
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start. Please continue this story please.