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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet God! The more I read the more I fear what it's coming. I think it was Clark the one who killed Lionel, and I'll never end to thank him for that, he really deserve some huge award. But the painting's implications sent chills down my spine...Whoever God(s) has power in the sky shouldn't let the history repeat herself. Please ! Update asap and keep the two boys alive as long as you can. I know the plot has its own needs, but I'm begging. I think you are a great writer, if I didn't make myself clear before...
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing how you get them related and to see how things played out from the reveal of the painting to Lionel's death to the police station scene. Hope you update soon!
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, can't wait to read more chapters.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, lionel had me totally captured with his story about his ancestors!!!!!!
and imagine the huge surprise when the men on the painting were lookalikes of clark and lex!!!!!!!!
I love how you start things so slowly and building the mystery!
and imagine the huge surprise when the men on the painting were lookalikes of clark and lex!!!!!!!!
I love how you start things so slowly and building the mystery!
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great ending. Keep up the fantastic work.
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more, more. Please, more.
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHHHH!! MORE MORE MORE!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. You have Clark and Lex pegged wonderfully. I love the end of the last chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens. Please update soon!
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, I finally had time to go here, and read the second chapter, which is actually a prequel *g*
you have made a lovely job in describing clarks insecurity and loneliness of being more and more having to share lex with Helen!
and I know, that lex is probably only trying to protect clark from himself , but hell, if things wont turn out as he has planned :)
hopes for more chapters soon!
you have made a lovely job in describing clarks insecurity and loneliness of being more and more having to share lex with Helen!
and I know, that lex is probably only trying to protect clark from himself , but hell, if things wont turn out as he has planned :)
hopes for more chapters soon!
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really like this story, and the whole idea of it. Great premise. I can't wait to see where else this goes. Nicely done. :-)