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for A Prank Too Far

by Natal

person mary
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oiy, forgot to mention, love the OC!
person Silent_Aura
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! You, my dear, are AMAZING. :) Loved it x 1,000,000,000, as usual! :-D Their beginning to care for one another seems natural due to your great timing -- you rock! ;0D
person SassieLassie11988
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And I get to profess my love to you once again, heehee. You're awesome at being able to write so much smutty goodness without having it get stale! How DO you do it? =-P LoL Most writers can't, but you...WOW! ;)
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!!!!!! So sorry I didn't get around to reviewing this earlier -- I'd begun to think you wouldn't update. :*( ~sniffle~ lol But that was great -- witty, fast-paced, fluent, and hot, as usual. Keep it up! ;0D
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the best fanfic that I have ever read! Congratulation!!
The story had not end in chapter 9 did it? Hope not. Please, add some more, ok?
person Silent_Aura
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! That was hilarious, haha - I can't believe they created a domestic disturbance. XD I'm glad you finally updated - I'd been waiting on pins and needles! ;0D
person SassieLassie11988
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell yes! SO glad you updated! I wonder what'll happen now that they got their 'fix'? Will they die? O_O
person Angelique
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Flawless work, my dear! :) It's very hot n' steamy, but without being over the top. I really love you OC (I never love OCs!!) and her contribution to the story. Please hurry and continue!
person GoldenJezebel
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In case if I forgot to review, it's hot and VERY well-written. :)
person Celeste McKibbin
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It seems to me that some SERIOUSLY disturbed geek on here keeps trying to give this fic four stars, because I constantly go through every day to override it so that you'll have five. I don't know WHO'S doing it, but they're full of crap, because this is seriously THE best het fic I've read in a long time. If you ever see this fic with 4 stars, ignore it, because it does NOT reflect the true value of this fic at all. Cheers!