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for A Prank Too Far

by Natal

person Isabel
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfiction!!! Please write more!!!!
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*explodes gleefully into a pile of sparkly pink confetti* Oh I am so happy you have updated. You have no idea how happy you have made me. *sigh* Poor poor Tawny. (Even though her name makes her sound like a stripper...*grins*) I adore this story and I adore you for writing it. You are absolutely brillian my love. I found this over on FF.net, and followed it over here. I check here and there for updates, and I'm pretty sure I have read all your stuff. You're brilliant. And if you aren't working towards being published...you should. Everything is so detailed, everyone is in character...I can honestly say this is the best Huddy I have ever read. I am on pins and needles wondering if she is "spawning", and Houses's reaction to a positive test if there is one...and to find out who this prankster is. Is it some mischievous higher power that wants to get House and Cuddy together...is it Lokey? Hmmm, Lkey is male, and the prankster is female...unless he can take different forms...or maybe I am reading too much into this...I dunno, I am kinda tipsy right now...LOL. Anywho...great update, can't wait to find out what happens...love this story...love you!!! XXOO Oooh, almost forgot...love his addition to research on Ketamin...XXOO
person Jane
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG!!! Two updates! And with plenty of our favorite OC! Thank you! Ok, I'll stop with the !!! Once again, amazing work you maintain a truth to characters that we love--the interactions between Cuddy and House show the strengths and the flaws that Hugh and Lisa work so hard to bring to us in each episode. As for your OC, Michael is such the perfect foil to Tawny, and the scene with Cuddy was priceless! (sorry had to sneak one more of those buggers in). Your soooo, so, so talented, thanks for the updates :-D
person Sarah
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!! I'm not gonna lie, I've been coming to this site pretty much everyday looking for updates, yup I'm that pathetic....and I wasn't even a Huddy fan...note the past tense :D
person Chosen One
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you guilted a review out of me. I can't believe I'm even marginally interested in your Tawny character, but I am. ;) Keep this story going, you! I want to know who is behind these hijinks.
person yourFAN
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, well written, with a twist, it often made me laugh and even more often.. horny :D
so congratulations I can't wait to see more. You've shown the character of both lisa and house very well but my fav will be Tawny and her son.

there is going to be more, right? pleaaase..
pretty please?
person Mary
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I hate you, its official, I actually really and truly HATE YOU! I hate that you made me into a Huddy fan, I HATE-HATE-HATE that you made me into an actually OFC fan. I mean I'm sooo much of a fan of your OC that I actually get disappointed when your updates don't include her character development. I hate the fact that I run to this damn web page *daily* yes, daily, to see if you have updated. I hate that you have made your House soo true to form that it actually made me see more depth in then the already amazing portrayal that Hugh Laurie does. Finally, and I do hope that you made it past the first couple of words and actually read this review, I love you, I love your story, and if I could I would make you the head House producer because, you could some how make this great show even better! So, please don't give up on this story, and please give us sad, sad fans a sense of closure, cuz they aint gonna give us one anytime soon!
person dlb42694
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to update
person Ero Sennin
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sinister,

Dear God Almighty, where do I start? With the completely dead on perfectly written House? The wonderfully complex, badass Tawny? My dear woman, this is the best House fanfic I have ever read, hands down. (And believe me when I say I have read A LOT!!) It is the perfect blend of porn, and plot. And the stalker, absolutely genius. I have never seen anything like it in a story before. Your beautiful words dance around me, enchanting me, like little faeries. I get lost in the character dialogue, and your style of writing, and your way with words in general, is like an earth shattering orgasm for my mind. I have not read any of your other work yet, (I am delighted to know there is more, from reading your a/n's) but I know I will not be disapointed. I have not looked at the date to see when you last updated this story, I am terrified it will say something along the lines of March 2006. That has happened to me more times than I can count. I too am a humble author, a mistress of smut if you will, (^.^) and I am working on a House love story. I am hoping that when I finally post it, I won't get a million flames, for it involves an OC, and it stemmed from a dream that I had when I was pregnant with my youngest, after watching, guess what? The Mr. Dead sexy he can take me any time, any way he wants Gregory House. *blushes* It was a wonderful dream. Anyhow, I hope this review came out as flattering, and not at all weird or creepy. ^.^ You are amazing. Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us. I look forward to reading more. XXOO (P.S. I have been so desperate for the wonderful man, that not only do IA watch every re-run. I even went as far to watch him in Stuart Little. It sure is funny to see him all tidy and clean shaven, saying things like, "Well, there was an incident with the family cat. But he spat him out in one heck of a jiffy." LOL. September 8th!!!! *Loudest squee in the history of squees* I can't wait!!!
person vanny
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fianlly a good huddy fic! plz update soon! its been 2 months :/ im going to die