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by gryvon

person herm42
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice. loved the red oil and the depth with which you describe Garak's thoughts.

watch your diction though. there is a couple places where it looks like you are accidentally replacing words with something similar. Like captures, do you mean captors? Could be something that spellchecker "fixed" for you.