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for Survival Training

by mshelton95

person RyuaAlba
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was spectacularly well written. You stayed remarkably in character, and those were exceptionally delightful sex scenes on top of it. Very nice indeed!
person Aresy
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cute and hot. I dont really watch the show at all, but i like these two characters, and i wondered a what if. They are both kinda the opposite, so i find them a interesteing match. ^^
person Aresy
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And thanks for writing one with Ronon he is hot. :P Should be more written about.
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this alot. The dialog was easy, and the premise not at all contrived. I like slash, I write slash, but couldn't really conceive of Ronon slash. But I think you nailed it (no pun). I imagine that Ronon Dex probably wouldn't have the sexual hangups of his Earther colleagues and would as easily seduce a woman as a man? Thanks for a great story.