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for Sniper Dreams

by IrenaAdler

schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Oh, my.

Uh, wow - just - wow.

*scampers off to look to see your other stuff*
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was...interesting.
Hot, to be sure, but I can't help thinking you could have extended some parts of Charlie's thought pattern. Very good story, though, very, very hot. Keep writing!