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by skauble

schedule May 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Just reread this fic and I wanted, no needed to tell you how much fun I had reading it all over again. And actually, reading the ending for the first time. I'm so grateful you stayed true to their characters and that the ending portrayed the horrors of what Lex was about to do and did do.

Also, I love how you made me route for their love so that, after the horror of the mind-rape that happened, I was still, guiltily so, happy that they would fall in love all over again. And I wonder if Chloe, living a few years in Europe would try to push herself toward journalism instinctively or if she'd take up writing. I speculate because I must. To relieve my guilt that led was successful, I imagine them to be extremely happy together.
person Thornwitch
schedule June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's hot. Can she keep both of them? But seriously, great story.
person Carmen
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Drama!!! Why must you make us wait so long between posts? I can only be grateful you gave us 4 chapters this time. I know you have a life outside writing this story, but please try to update more often! You have plenty of people waiting in anticipation. I love love love this story. You are a great and gifted writer (though using spellcheck or editing couldn't hurt). Your dialogue rocks! It gives me chills, especially during this last post. If you ever publish anything, you must let us know! Have I sung your praises enough? Update soon!
person Selece
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I'm so in love with this story. I was seriously crying throughout with all the angst. Poor Chloe and Lex with his horrible run of bad luck and obsessive nature. It's so insane with everything, but it makes this story so freakin' awesome! I anxiously await the next chapter. =)
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story. I've ever been a big fan of pairing Chloe with Lex but I very much enjoy this story and how things are handled.
person Kelly
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it and I am dying for more !!!!!
person Cristal
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argghhh! Why must you torture me? [Shaking fist at heavens.] Please update...even though you just did. Question: Are you very anti-Lana? Why not let Clark and Lana live happily ever after instead of having Clark pine over Chloe now? Wait! I apologize. [Kneeling and bowing while waving arms up and down.] I must not question your brilliance. I'm sure there's a reason for everything. But update soon!
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no, Why does it have to end there, always gotta stop at the good part to torture your readers, you sadistic fiend!!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more!! Please update soon!!
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn you-Damn you to hell! I don't like Smallville, I have standards, I have...oh forget it, your gonna make me start liking this show and of course I'm going to be let down, because the writing from the overpaid staff will have nothing compared to the shear brilliance that is showcased in this piece.

Your amazing, your great, your...ummm what else can I say that will get you to post the next update quicker ^_^