rate_review Reviews

Please write more. I really want to read what happens next. I don't the other guy as anything more than a catalisyt between the other three. There has to be some reason for them to jump each other. Please write more of this rare pairing.
Thanks.

I like the story and want to read more. I really like this threesome or danial/tealc parings. there are not eniugh of either. please write more of them.
Thanks,
Jade

Please keep on wriing. I really wan to read more. maybe a prequell or sequell? I love this pairing. Saddly there aren't many stories out there adout them. T.T, :C.
Please write soon.
Thanks
Jade

Wow! Hot! Your logistics alone must have been 'hard' to write. Poor Daniel, though. He accommodated the others but didn't get his own turn. Unless he got it by getting it in the end...

Having them meet up in Jack's bed would be a bonus but I like the story as it is, too. I do wonder why they all dreamt of Tanith, though. Some suppressed desires?

Good job, I liked this a lot.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! write another chapter! I need the three of them to talk about this and then get back to more sex! Please! I beg of you!

hey, here I am, reviewing, woo hoo! You already know my opinion on this sucker, but..

Liked the sex, it's kinked just right for me. woo hoo. I thought the line 'prostate in his crosshairs' was wonderful, as well as a lot of the dialogue, both inner and outer, from Jack. I think his thoughts, as well as T's...who I'm not naming so I don't give anything away...were what made it fun to read.